Comments : No Refills

  • 12 years ago

    by Kailynn Makenna

    Hey awesome poem! i really liked it!!

    xX-Katherine-Xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Vix

    The rhyming scheme you have used in “No Refills”, I think, causes the whole piece to flow brilliantly, and again as in “The City”, the imagery your work concocts is inexplicable, the descriptive wording and fantastic use of language, it all adds to the over all effect of the poem…
    I have added you to my favourites list, I think your poetry is inspiring and thought provoking, I love what I’ve seen of it, I cannot even comprehend how deep your imagination must be…
    vix.

  • 12 years ago

    by Anthony Q Peek

    Thanks to all who have commented,
    you have truly touched me by taking the time to read my babies!
    Thanks, Anthony Q.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lipton

    Wow... You're right. "No refills" for you. jk. Good job, though. Your imagery is great. Can't wait to hear more!

    ~Ciao Lipton

  • 12 years ago

    by miss scooby

    WOW, you wrote this beautifully, although i found this particular peice to be somewhat sad and have this message lingering within each word. However, the flow was amazing as well as the unique style of writing. deserves nothing less then a 5/5
    take care always
    Scooby

  • 12 years ago

    by Elise

    WOW that poem is so sad but just so amzing...its full of emotions and its just beautiful...wow...
    Take care,
    E.

  • 12 years ago

    by chavii

    words r not enough 2 tell how 1 feel i can relate 2 it (my own cousin who deceased) a very strong poem from heart 2 heart.

    ty 4 ur comment i really aapreaciate it.

    --chavii--

  • 12 years ago

    by Pia Andersson

    There is not much to see on the dark side , there is not enough light ...you realized it , didnt you Again an excellent poem from you in a style that is very much your own Have a beautiful evening , Pia

  • 10 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Oh my.....
    The past is a minefield and you have carefully and effectfully mined it here.....if you don't mind my saying so, your mind is deep and wide and here reflects your soul's intention to continue to rise.....Strive on, traveller!....As you clearly have seen,there is So much more possible than voluntary submission to dying inside a waking dream.......Strive On!