The rhyming scheme you have used in â€œNo Refillsâ€, I think, causes the whole piece to flow brilliantly, and again as in â€œThe Cityâ€, the imagery your work concocts is inexplicable, the descriptive wording and fantastic use of language, it all adds to the over all effect of the poemâ€¦
I have added you to my favourites list, I think your poetry is inspiring and thought provoking, I love what Iâ€™ve seen of it, I cannot even comprehend how deep your imagination must beâ€¦
WOW, you wrote this beautifully, although i found this particular peice to be somewhat sad and have this message lingering within each word. However, the flow was amazing as well as the unique style of writing. deserves nothing less then a 5/5
take care always
There is not much to see on the dark side , there is not enough light ...you realized it , didnt you Again an excellent poem from you in a style that is very much your own Have a beautiful evening , Pia
The past is a minefield and you have carefully and effectfully mined it here.....if you don't mind my saying so, your mind is deep and wide and here reflects your soul's intention to continue to rise.....Strive on, traveller!....As you clearly have seen,there is So much more possible than voluntary submission to dying inside a waking dream.......Strive On!