Comments : Dear Lord, Take My Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    omg that was brilliant! u r such a gr8 writer! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Excellent poem! It was so sweet and sad, all at the same time! I really liked the style you used, and how you pointed out at various places in the poem how young the little boy was, yet how much faith he had in God and in the fireman. Great job, keep it up.
    -Kate
    (It deserves a 10, but a *5* will have to do.)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiombe aka Lady

    That was deep