I Luved this poem and i can relate. your a wonderful writter...

Very good -claps- very good!!

So very sad and touching. Wonderful poem.
-A

Wow i love it it is so deep yet so true i never dated so ya i would feel same wow it must be hard to be hurt that way.

awww thats so sad, hope ur ok, but yer u are very talented, keep it up xx byez xx

aww such a sad poem...loved it tho.. but very sad...it actually kinda put a tear to my eye

Wow that was such a good poem. . . especially knowing it came from a guy (no offense) but honestly its awesome how a guy can show his tru feelings in a poem and to know that poetry isnt jus a girl things! ur a great writer!

Hey im really sorry that someone did something so terribly wrong to you... thats horrible i know the feeling cause the exact thing happened to me... but life goes on and you will meet that true special someone...

wow... I never expected so many people would respond. Thank you... I'm glad that all of you are kind enough to do this. thanks everyone.

this is really good keep up the great writen i hope to read more from you in the future, 5 outa 5 lots of love krys

i like it alot!! it reminds me of what i did to my last boy friend and i feel bad for that and for what i am

Wow! This poem was so sad, yet so beautiful. It took my breath away. Wonderful job.

it was beautiful i felt ur pain.......... i rerali enjoyed it keep up the good work

This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over her just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem.

This poem was written to beautifully. The flowed so well too. Your a great writer, and you have an amazing gift. Keep up the great work! xX

Wow you have such talent!

truelly touching. i love it. mwah. best of luck hun

I really liked this poem even though it was sad. Keep writing.

Aaaaaaawwwww it's so sad and sweet.
it truly shows how much u love that girl, i'm sorry u had to go through that.
u wrote it perfectly, it's one of the best poems i've ever read :)
take care.
adios!

pili.

Simply amazing i can realate to that in evrey way

it hurts alot to find out the one u put up on a pedistal has just giving up on u and it suks sitting at night thinking about how hes holding her and how happy she is but it is also kinda funny cuz ur happy for her u really are but ur stuck in so much saddness and shes the only one that can fix it and she doesnt even try

david