I can realte to this poem, thus making it a lot more interesting. I liked the rhyming in this one as well as your other one. You could make it a little longer though.

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oh thank you so mcuch
im gonna go check out yours now.
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thanks

that was a great poem, hope to read more of your work, great job!!

Short but well written. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

Short, but sweet poem. Too the point. Good job.

great poem!! keep it up!! :)

thanks

Exellent! Sometimes poems are better when they are short and sweet. U got ur point out there without having to make it any longer!

This is a good poem and shows that the smaller poems can contain the strongest meaning. Well Done. 5/5. Love Emma xxx