that fricken sucks!!! im so sorry that he did that to you on this day. guys can be real jerks sometimes and yet we love them to death...wierd. keep up the good work and dont stop writting.

~Briana~ With Love

I can't believe it happened on valentine's day either, why not any other day than this one, what an a*!$hole. The poem was really good though! Very heart felt and emotionally written, keep writing. xxxx

omg great poem!!!! so full of feeling and so heartfelt i loved it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really really liked the paragraph:

I'm a lone rose
forgotten on the ground
My heart feels as though
its gained a hundred pounds

yeah thats brilliant and so creative!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
awsome work!
>>5/5<<
bec xXx

GASP! THAT FRICKEN SUCKS!!!!! great heart felt poem

Sorry about that. =( Sometimes we dont know how precious some1 is until he/she is gone. =( Still great poem a lot of emotions andbe strong!! 5/5

i loved this poem.. and i totally kno how you feel, my boyfriend broke up with me a little before valentines day.. but everythings gonna be alright, dont worry about it.. great work on your poem tho, keep it up.. check out my poems if your interested!

..xO Jessie

i loved ur poem it was soo meaninfull great work and im sorry abt that it sux but be strong life is hard who said its easy soo take care :D
peace

Great! Love the second stanza where you compare yourself to a rose on the ground. You get a 5! haha Keep it up!
Take care!
-Conner

um i just like to say the inspiration i got for my little red rose poem is from the 2nd stanza of this poem so.... u can read that 2 if u want