i really loved it!
wonderful poem!
it was so well put and so descriptive
keep it up!

~*LorienElf*~

thx a lot...u're comment means a lot to me, thx

ops!! grammar mistake...sry.. i mean "ur comments" with no "re" :D

awesome poem. so true to

thx for ur comments....it means a lot to, knowing that ppl like my work:)...

oops!! sry...grammar mistake:)...."it means a lot to me" i forgot "me":)

hey!

great rhyme, great flow. I love this poem.

And thanks again for all of your comments! I can see a lot of people have been telling you the same thing!

keep it up!

-brittany

thx, bob...well, at least i have an excuse for my grammar mistakes...and you'll get what i'm saying if u see what country i'm form:)...but i must admit, the "he's" instead of "his" mistake i was vrey shocked to see it!.....and as for "dieing" instead of "dying", i never knew how to write the "-ing" form of the verb "to die":)....well, i guess, i'll know from now on:)....

ok, i'm going to the bathroom now to punish myself by cutting my wrists :)))....just kidding

very nice poem...5/5

Unloved

i liked it. i gave it a 5! it was awesome
...sarah...

thanks for commmetning.. i love this poem.. it means so much to me

Hiya! *waves* Excellent poem! The rhymes were all really original and I enjoyed reading it alot. I gave it a 5!
Take care,
Rachelxx

Thanks also for all the comments on my work. It means alot to me!

Hey great poem. It's sad too.

WOW.....Ilinca that was sad but yet beautiful 5/5 all the way to good to be 4.6 lov ya :) take care

Excellent! You painted the picture of this fallen angel perfectly! 5!

This is a very powerful poem its really well written it send vivid images across thanks for your comment and keep it up!

take care

great job. This poem is really powerful. <3333

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WOW. i don't know what to say at the poem, just that it was awesome! 5/5.