Comments : From angel to demon

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*LorienElf*~

    i really loved it!
    wonderful poem!
    it was so well put and so descriptive
    keep it up!

    ~*LorienElf*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Elynnka

    thx a lot...u're comment means a lot to me, thx

  • 12 years ago

    by Elynnka

    ops!! grammar mistake...sry.. i mean "ur comments" with no "re" :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Noelle k.

    awesome poem. so true to

  • 12 years ago

    by Elynnka

    thx for ur comments....it means a lot to, knowing that ppl like my work:)...

  • 12 years ago

    by Elynnka

    oops!! sry...grammar mistake:)...."it means a lot to me" i forgot "me":)

  • hey!

    great rhyme, great flow. I love this poem.

    And thanks again for all of your comments! I can see a lot of people have been telling you the same thing!

    keep it up!

    -brittany

  • 12 years ago

    by Elynnka

    thx, bob...well, at least i have an excuse for my grammar mistakes...and you'll get what i'm saying if u see what country i'm form:)...but i must admit, the "he's" instead of "his" mistake i was vrey shocked to see it!.....and as for "dieing" instead of "dying", i never knew how to write the "-ing" form of the verb "to die":)....well, i guess, i'll know from now on:)....

    ok, i'm going to the bathroom now to punish myself by cutting my wrists :)))....just kidding

  • 12 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    very nice poem...5/5

    Unloved

  • 12 years ago

    by sarah k

    i liked it. i gave it a 5! it was awesome
    ...sarah...

  • 12 years ago

    by iwanttobalone

    thanks for commmetning.. i love this poem.. it means so much to me

  • 12 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Hiya! *waves* Excellent poem! The rhymes were all really original and I enjoyed reading it alot. I gave it a 5!
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

    Thanks also for all the comments on my work. It means alot to me!

  • 12 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Hey great poem. It's sad too.

  • 12 years ago

    by James

    WOW.....Ilinca that was sad but yet beautiful 5/5 all the way to good to be 4.6 lov ya :) take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Forever29

    Excellent! You painted the picture of this fallen angel perfectly! 5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Victoria

    This is a very powerful poem its really well written it send vivid images across thanks for your comment and keep it up!

    take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    great job. This poem is really powerful. <3333

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

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    WOW. i don't know what to say at the poem, just that it was awesome! 5/5.