aww very cute poem!! love it!! keep it up!! :)

aww so sweet 5/5!
xxxChristinaxxx

really good well done 5

very sweet, and loving!! 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Sweet.
Its nice to be in love right?
I really poems like this.
Keep it up.

awwwwwww sweet poem great work keep it up, i especially like the opening stanza xxxxxxx

Really sweet love poem, it is very beautiful!!! Keep witing, you have talent!!!

Aw, its really cute. Its a really good poem, keep it up!!
x3me

Yet another excellent poem. I really like the honesty and unique way you addressed the situation; it isn't the everyday, run-of-the-mill "I love you so much I!" love poem. It really stands out as being an inner-conflict. Great job.
~God Bless~
-Kate

awww so sweet and so true. really nice poem well done!!! take care
xxxLoUxxx

very sweet....be strong and hold on....life isn't worth living without love :-)