if there is one thing i have come to see out of you, is that you are not a patetic watse of gods air, you have change me (and id be suprised if i was the only one)

this is a great poem, and i love you very much

love mark.

wow that was fcukn good! i realy liked that, u are reali good! i hope u keep writeing aye, shit!! well done!

wow great poem i loved it :D
dont hate ur self i dont know wat u hv been through ur life but hatin urself makes it worse ..... i know u might think life is not fair true its not (sometimes) but things happen for a reason and u should always except wat they r if they were good or bad they do hv a reason ...
ones again beautiful poem
peace take careee

Good poem, keep up the good work. It was a good and touching poem.

Omg that's such an amazing poem...it kept me reading wanting to know what happened to that once happy girl...like in all of your poems!
You're an awesome writer and don't think you a pathetic excuse for god's air because you have helped so many people and so many people care for you...You're defiently more than that.
Keep up the good work!

Thanks Everyone..I Have Missed Writting So Much,,Starting To Think Iv Lost It But As Always You Guys Restore My Faith In The Power Of Words..ThankYou..I Have Made So Many Mistakes In My Life And Oneday I Hope To Correct Them Mmm..Thankyou...Peace Alll..Mwa Mwa Hails