Good...I liek the words you used. Keep up the good work and I cant wait to read more!
Julie

Short n' sweet

Great job. its written well and the choice of words is nice

THIS IS A CREATIVE POEM ALSO

This is good a lot of images, buetiful

Love the choice of words. Nice job

XxXKristie MarieXxX

This is sooooo gooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

--Hannah