i know what that is like, and it is a great poem. why are you appologising for it being bad. keep up the great work. good job. keep a track of yourself ;P

Not very good? I thought it was excellent. It captivated me from the first line till the end, totaly awsome!
5/5

Dave....

dont critisize ur work badly, it was Great poem, i liked it. Thank you for your comment. Ill be posting a new poem up soon “Dear Journal”, so look out for it. When I do, could you plz read it as well as rate/comment it. Thank you, it is much appreciated.

That was interesting.

this is excellent, great job, i really loved every stanza. KEep up the good work!!
always**~~**
cate