Comments : Unpretty

  • 12 years ago

    by Child of God

    Nice job hun very true!! and i tihnk alot of girls can really relate to that because i think everyone does atleast one point of their life keep writting 5/5 xoxo -Rachel

  • 12 years ago

    by Child of God

    Nice job hun very true!! and i tihnk alot of girls can really relate to that because i think everyone does atleast one point of their life keep writting 5/5 xoxo -Rachel

  • 12 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Man, you know this is SO true! Well, as others have said. But yeah! The dept of this poem it great. Love the poem. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amit

    True, Heather. Once again a beautiful poem.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 12 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    the heart is the most beautiful feature of every walking person

    Yep so true, but you are pretty anyway (well in ya pic!) Great poem
    love ya Sammi

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    heather, this is beautiful! i loved the last thing you said; "My father is God, He only creates beauty". it's so true! that's really clever, and i love that! you're awesome, heather. if only there were more people like you in the world! love ya, heather!
    *Zac*

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    ya it's sad to see what some girls do to be "Pretty" it ruins thier life! great poem, *claps*

    ~lil slam~ PLP

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    honestly it was pretty good. i don't know if it was your best stuff heather. Probably cause i was Imging you all the time. I am sure that you can do much better then this. I know that you can do things.

    Very nice quote at the end, really liked it.

    Love ya,
    Shaun Aka Dark Savior

  • 12 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    It's a great one..I liked it!

    Thanks for all your comments and voting

    Chris

  • Hey hun
    Amazing poem..Very meaningful! Great writting..Keep it up!
    Shannon

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Beautiful Heather.... It is true...We see it everyday...Very nice write!!! And as always it will be a five if it lets me rate....hunbun's computer is a little screwy.....lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    My sweet Heather, you truly said it all and so much truth. Why society is like this I don't know. I always want the people I know to have a loving and caring heart like you. Then you have all the beauty in the world. Well written and great job. love ya bunches, hugs, *Ann*

  • 12 years ago

    by Bizarre

    I'm pretty sure a lot of girls can relate to this.
    Great writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow...amazing poem!!

    "My father is God, He only creates beauty."

    that quote is wonderful, i love it. it really does make you think about all of the youth in the world and what they think about themselves. another great write!!

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very powerful message...Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by DestinyAwaits

    Beautiful! I agree with you on that one! 5!