Damn this is good, great inspiration, though you dont feel like this....HOLD ON!!!

and inspiration u gave me, katie, u give me something to look forward to everyday, reading ur poems, they really are like, the best!!!!

Luv Always
#~*LuCy*~#

Very good.It was worth the time of reading.

ok your really good, you're such a good writer, you get so many comments how do you do it?.. well anyways good job i love this one.

yea it did! ameks u think and hold on! a lot of us feel crap alot of the time and im feeling pretty misrable at the mo...duno y tbh lol....but cheered me up and nicly written!
take care and if u have time views sum of my poems!
xxxLoUxxx

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much love cate

this is so inspirin, im hope soon u do feel this way. i love the first stanza especially its fab xxxx

wow, so good... thanks for your lovely comment.. meant a lot.. I voted a 5 for this on.. take care!!

hey hun this was beautifully expressed! Very good feelings in it! :)

Wow! Good poem!

Awesome...you have great views and a great way of showing them. Love it

~*~Christina~*~

i loved the message! 5/5

i wish when we wrote poems that we could inspire ourselves. This is a great poem and I'm sorry these words your spoke aren't true! Please, let me know if you ever need to talk!

it is sound advice on theory... but it is quite hard to actually do... good job in writing it. i know how hard it is to write against your feelings. but you did a good job. i hope to see some more work from you soon.

The way you have written it.. it is so beautifull i feel like you know exactly what i need
i'm amazed by the way you can write this down when you're not even feeling like it.
Great job and keep up the good work
many people love it/such as I.
5/5.

You are right, it inspired me.

Hey this is a good poem

This was a really good poem and also insperation. it made me want to try better in life.

I like this alot, it really struck a chord for me. I hope it can do the same for alot of people. FYI I added you as a favorite

So stay on more day
I htink you meant stay on one more day :)
This poem was inspirational even if you didn't feel taht way at the time. When you've basically been kicked around by people it's hard to smile a true smile without always wondering whether it's even real or not.
There were a few things that felt awkward but that's usually because of a missing letter like it=its etc.
Other than that, it really was a good poem just like the rest of yours.