thats absolutely alluring. the flow is marvelous. easily a 5/5

kelly

yet another great poem! lol keep it up!

*jenny*

lol, ty!

nice and very good in rhyme. gtg, see ya. will comment on others later, need to leave now. btw, cry baby is one of the many names given to me by my gf, lol. now i've changed it.

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

Wishing you a Happy Holi
(the festival of colors, celebrated in India)

Love, Amit

Carleeeee!!!!! SOO CUTEE!!! Truly remarkable!! Who was this about? Or did you just write it? It was soo good in any case!

Muy Bien!!! I looved it!! I loooove yoU! :-D! Have a good day m'dear.

~Sierra

aww that was a good poem, i really liked the last stanza it just pulled the whole poem together. excellent job
stay strong always

ty, all of ya! Yah, I actually wrote this poem about someone, Sierra. Any wild guesses? All in good friendship! You stole my "m'dear!" Hehe, just kiddin... you are welcome to my quirky phrases! ttyl, ty very much,
Car

NoOoO, lol, m'dear was around since before you were born!! Before I was born!! You cookie muncher!! aw...I'll brb...my dogs barking....stupid doggy, lol. BRB>

lol-back. HmmMMM,...my mind's racing...who'd you write it about? Zac, Me, Nick, Kelly, Jenny, Mel, Amy? lol-I don't know.....Should I know????? lol. lyl, ttyS!! Tootles

Cookie muncher? That's a new one, lol... wb, by the way... Um, I've never actually met Nick... hehe. I've only actually looked at one person on that list... is that a clue? Hee! Lylas,
Car

no, lol, I'm still blonde, and compltely clueless!!! lol-keep sending the clues.

I don't know whether to rule Nick off the list or not! lol, lyl,

~Sierra

Sierra, girl! It isn't that hard... I've never met Nick! I don't even think I've read any of his stuff... well, I have. But I've never looked at him, so how could there be a first look if it hasn't happened? You loser! lol, jm... There is only one person on that ENTIRE list of yours that I have ever met in person. It isn't too difficult... keep thinking! hee!
Car

I've read several of your poems and you are awsum at wat u do! I'm definetlely adding u 2 my favorites! Luv ya!

GrRrRRRR...I'm in a pickle!!!! It has to be either Jenny or Kelly. They both live in Colorado!!!

It can't be Zac, you're just good friends, it can't be me, cuz lets face it, I'm a retard :-P, it can't be mel or amy because they're just ginormous fans of yours! :-D! lol-I'm one tooo!! lol!!

SooooO........I'll have to go with...>Jenny. Was this poem about the Jennymeister? lol.

U

LOSER! lol, it is Zac, hon, he's the only one here I've ever actually met! Why couldn't it be him?
Car

Hahahahahahahahaha, I didn't actually know you've met Zac!!!!!! lmao!! I am stupid! lol!! I'm soooorrryy!! lol!! :-P

Lol, yeah, I met him at CHristian camp in the seventh grade. Good times... ttyl! Happy Easter! Thanks Mel!
Car