I love this poem! It's awesome! =) sometimes I feel like this in front of people who i thought were my closest friends. I love this. Please check out some of my poems and rate/comment. Thanxs, and keep writing.
~Ciao~
Krista

aww thats sad but i can relate. its a great poem! keep it up!

*jenny*

ive felt like that a lot lately. beautifully written 5/5.

.:kelly:.

aww! good poem! I can relate!! Sorry that you feel like that...is it ButtMunch doin' that to ya?

carlee, this poem is incredible... honest.. i think it's my new favorite... you did a fantastic job, carlee... and... if this is about me, which it could be, i'm so sorry and i feel guilt covering every inch of my body right now... i love you, carlee, and i dont ever wanna leave you
*Zac*

ty, all of you for commenting! I greatly appriciate it.
Car

OoOoOooOo!!!!! THAT WAS SOO GOOOOOOD!!! YOUR BESTESTESTESTESTESESTESTEST!!! lol. FANTASTIC!! YAH MAN!!!!

Lol, ty, sierra!
Car

I can really relate to this poem, I think it's awesome! You keep writing like this Car
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ty all!
Car

hey great poem... i liked it 5/5 keep it up!
Much love ~ Tina

ty. Tina!
Car

OH, that is one sad poem...

IT is alltogether written in a quite simple way, but still kept me interested...very good!

The rhyming scheme and the flow works out just fine...

Great poem!