hey i love ur poem i give u a 5

Hmmmmm...... Hmmmm.....Very Nice.... Excellent write... I loved every part of it.

Five for certain.

Love,
libby

hey amit~ sorry it took me so long to commment on this poem, i've just been really busy you know?....i guess if u don't know...if u havn't read my poem "my farewell" i have to leave this site for reasons i shouldn't really speak of. i will always think of u and have you in my heart. take care always, and i will miss you~ i love ya~
*brittany*

That was really good you described everything so well it was a real good poem lol good

Omg this is such a nice poem. It’s going to be my favourite for ages. You must be a real romantic lol
Please please keep up to the good work
(Thanks for the comment on my poem)

Amazing poem. I loved it. 5 for sure

Very hot and very beautiful. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Love this poem. Thanks again for commenting. I'd love to talk with you sometime. My AIM screename is Cherry0xPiie iM me sometime!

Love Alwaysz,
<3 Katie <3

wow..great poem dude...

it makes more people feel sensational desires. And well I thought it was good

wow amit
this was such a great poem
goooooood Job
~NANA~

That was such a great poem no words could begin to describe it...5/5
great job
~cassie~

i really love you poem... good work keep it up....

Wow, what a wonderful tender love story...Very thought provoking with so much visonary passion.

I have read some of your other work, still reading ha!ha! you truely are an awe-inspiring poetic magican...very ellipitcal in sytle.

Thank you for your comment on my 'Secret Love' If you have time please check out my other poems I would really like to hear your opinions, thank you and kind regards
Hayley

Oh!!! my, it was good for me
I read it was good for you. lol
*lights a cigarette*

Seriously,
A very sweet and passionate write of
two souls in love beautifully written.
Excellent poem, Write On.

if i could give you a ten i would! that was awesome! 10!

WHOA AMIT!!! lol Very nice write!! I enjoyed! :)~

HOLY SHIT THAT WAS F_CKIN AWSOME
i wouldnt be sersrised if you become a pro at this. i really think that you might and look at your votes 264 about to be 265 i can even get over 10. boo-hoo. well great just (like i said before i have you under fav) keep writting. peace dude

xox Ashmo To The Extreme xox

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visits: 9209 (and more the come)
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rating: 4.6

HOLY SHIT

great poem, very hot!xxxxx