wow i REALLY liked this keep it up xxxx

Such a heartbreak to lose one in a battle. Nice touch portraying her happiness in the beginning. Good Job

-Sher

So sad and emotional!! That's the worse thing a mother can go through, loosing her children....Great poem really heartbroken!!! Love it!!!

oh my god this is such a great poem. i really like it i even have tears in my eyes. i guess its cause i have a boyfriend out there and lots of family. keep up the good work i loved ur poem.

wonderful poem
"“Jack was always so determined,”
she whispered to the walls." was the best part....she whispered to the walls. That's sheer brilliance. Job well done, 5/5.

christa//no motiv?

:( So upsetting, but so powerful. Very emotional, I loved it. Never read anything like this before. Very unique. Well done, keep it up.

Take good care of yourself.
ALl my love,
Laura.

This is a wonderful poem and i really liked how you tackled an issue that most would be afraid to even touch. i think that you did a wonderful job on this poem and i think perhaps it is inspired by something that happened in real life.

I think it is a wonderful poem.

Five/Five.

P.S. thank you for your comment on my poem, i didn't think the flow matched the rest of it, i wasn't really sure about it, but it thought i would post it up, i didn't think i deserved that much of a low score though(i know you didn't do it) but i do thank you for your honesty, metaphores as poems just are not my area. Thank you

Signed,
Dark Savior

awww....that was really good, I loved it! Keep up the great work! MuchLoveAlwaysJJ

WOW you are an amazing writer keep up the AWSOME work

This was wonderfuly bryant.
I enjoyed reading it.
wish you the best,
marjan

OMG!! I love this poem, but it is sad. I hope i never happens to me because my fiance is in the army. Excelent Poem I Loved It!!!! check out some of mine...