Excellent write, as a poem. great one, with very good flow. Impressive work, but as far as my personal view is concerned, waiting is most of the times - fruitful!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

i liked this poem; well written.

Some waiting is good, I agree. Sorry for the unclear viewpoint... lol! ty both!
Car

Awww...that was good. I totally agree with you. That rocked babe!
Katie

Excellent poem. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

lol, ty!
Car

ty both... it's appriciated!
Car