Comments : This Smile

  • 19 years ago

    by lauren

    i reli liked you poem, i enjoyed reading itx

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Great poem, Amanda. Impressive write.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    A beautiful and very impressing poem. Tell it like it is, there are a lot out there that don't deserve our smile, after what they put us through. You go girl, I truly enjoyed. hugs, lots of love, **Ann**

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Omg, u r really talented! I'm at a loss for words, u r sooo going on my favs list!

  • 19 years ago

    by Libby M

    Amanda,

    First thank You for reading my material, it really means a lot to me:)

    Now, this poem shocked me right after I finished the first paragraph...ITS BEAUTIFUL.... ANd its so powerful-I sense strength and power-and you did a very wonderful job at describing how you feel... Looking forward to reading more.

    God Bless.

    Libby

  • 19 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    that is really sad, bnut it was really well written. keep up the great work.
    take care
    lia jnell

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse

    Beautifully written. Very sad though. I am sorry for your loss (if it was a true story).

    Jesse

  • 18 years ago

    by M J U

    Amanda, you continue to wow me. This is so far, in my opinion, the best. However, I still have more to read. This one is awesome. I was captured with "not a smirk, not a beam, not a grin." Thanks for sharing your talents.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I really like the strength behind your words! You have a unique way of getting your point across! I enjoy reading your poetry, it's awesome~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Like the expression of anger in a cheerful tone