Comments : Stranded heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy Jo

    We pushed past a lot of faces (This paragraph is talking about two people leaving everyone
    Into the car to better places rain to go to better places b/c they want to be w/ each other
    You one step in front of me and no one else and it's raining outside b/c this is what it's
    The rain pouring, hard to see typically like when they're together.)

    Our faces drenched in silvery tears ( They're crying b/c they've liked each other so long and
    From heaven they've poured years and now they're finally together so it's kinda like a
    Before we leave you look at me blessing from heaven and there's no turning back now)
    I look back, knowing it's meant to be

    We kiss sweet and tenderly ( This basically is saying how much they love each other, but
    From obligation I want to flee their heads are saying something different then their minds)
    I buckle up and we drive away
    No words would you hear us say

    Lights turn off and we make our goodbyes (He's dropping her off after they've been togethr
    My parents are up and not surprised for the night and she thinks w/o him she thinks she'll
    I don't want to leave your side die b/c she loves him so much and this is also showing
    Without you I surely would've died how they're not sure if they should be together b/c they're so inseperable and it's hard to be apart.)

    You drove off in the rain (basically the rain was when they were together and together there
    That washed away our pain was no pain)
    I got in the house and call you
    You're not answering, what to do?

    Two hours, three hours, four... (self-explanatory... he's not answering and she's wondering if
    I need to know, i can't take it any more he's okay.. also questioning what she said last in
    Where are you? Are you okay? case he died)
    What were the last words i had to say?

    Morning comes and I'm waking up
    Calling your phone to see what's up
    You don't answer so I'm kinda scared
    All is lost, the memories we shared

    My phone rings not far from here
    From heaven here comes another tear (It's a diff. kind of tear b/c now she's crying b/c she
    But from my eye it starts to shed is the one crying it b/c she just lost her love and knows it
    My hunger for your love won't be fed by the phone call

    So young and innocent (Lost her love now she's stranded because his love guided her)
    You my love I won't forget
    Now I'm just a stranded heart
    Dropped down to the bottom of the chart

    The rain pours onto my face (She wants to be with him, have god take her to heaven to be
    Take me God, to a better place with him)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason B

    i love you poems