Comments : For you..

  • 12 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    so loving.. i enjoyed this. i vote a 5. check mine out..
    this is good. is it to a boyfrend?
    interesting and haert warming.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Yes absolutely loved it! Wonderful job and thanks for the comment! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Carmen

    wow... i wish nobody that i love will ever say they're not good enough for me.... because i wouldnt love them if they were? hmm.... well, great poem! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    I liked this... but I had a hard time wanting to finish it... Good work tho... Sherrie

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    a lot of feeling and emotion mixed with understanding makes a beautiful poem may God bless you

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    That was really good, well done... I really enjoyed it... I can relate to it.. it was well written keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Great poem but maybe try to shorten it becoz it's starts to lose it's appeal but i still really enjoyed it and gave it 5

  • 12 years ago

    by David Paul

    Its a really good poem that has a really good rhyme to it. Also some of the lines are uneven. Not trying to point out all thats wrong its just that people do that to mine sometimes. Its a really good poem though. My ex did that to me and this is the poem I could have used then to bring up my uhhhhhh hopes. thank you for sharing the poem with us.

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very well written and good rhyme I seem to have trouble with that! Showed emotion and feeling! Great poem 5/5! Take Care! Brooke

  • 12 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Very cute and sweet! It flowed so well....very beautiful! Please rate and comment on some of mine!
    love alwayz.....
    Haily
    XOXOXOXO

  • wow that is so sweet, truely touching. awsome work!!!!! >>5/5<<
    bec

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    great poem i know how that feels!

  • 12 years ago

    by erotema

    wonderful job. youre a great writer. the rhythm and meter were off (not to be critical, it just makes it hard to flow thru and read it), but the message was strong enough to carry it thru to the end.

    i give it a 5/5... great poem, keep them coming.

  • 12 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    good poem...very expressive. I gave it a 4/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    Oh hun... this is really good... I can feel you have had a broken heart...I think you did a great job with this poem...
    Xox Sherrie

  • 12 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Great poem. Beautiful and well written. Keep it up!

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 12 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    aww tht's soo sweet...good job n keep writing gurl!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ria

    This is great,it's like I hear myself talking...you reminded me so much...ohh:(
    I guess we have gone through the same phase..It's a lovely poem very emotional
    I would like to talk with you, if you have msn add me please (if you want)
    sotiriamaroula@yahoo.com

  • 12 years ago

    by asdfg

    Wow, so much emotion was in that poem. Great job. Keep writing. Your truely have talent.

  • 12 years ago

    by happy days

    i really liked that, i loved all the emotion in it aswell. keep up the good work xxxx