Its a really good poem that has a really good rhyme to it. Also some of the lines are uneven. Not trying to point out all thats wrong its just that people do that to mine sometimes. Its a really good poem though. My ex did that to me and this is the poem I could have used then to bring up my uhhhhhh hopes. thank you for sharing the poem with us.
This is great,it's like I hear myself talking...you reminded me so much...ohh:(
I guess we have gone through the same phase..It's a lovely poem very emotional
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