Wow, that is a really sad poem, so well written, well done, keep it up, take care xxx

That was so sad it brought tears to my eyes! Very well written! Take Care! Brooke

This is so soothing to know, I believe you will keep the memory of the bright siode of this poem. Keep it up and take care

awsome work Shannon =) 5/5!!! keep it up.. hugs from me!

...wow. i cant think of much else to say

very good 5/5

..i just read heavy guilt forever and now this. im really sorry, that is devastating. you have an incredible talent though, amazing work, brought tears to my eyes easily. amazing beyond all words.
trevor--

i read the other one that you said went with this my Lord they are sad great jog writing but i am now crying by how sad they are

omg! you poetry is so sad and shocking. im sorry about what happend and if you need to talk im here. demonprincess98@yahoo.com
i hope youre feeling a little bit better
best wishes
paulette

thats so sad........It made me cry, I know how you feel about distance relationships I live in california and my girl lives in Indiana I havent seen her since february....Im glad you had a friend to help you deal with your man, Im sorry he was taken so abruptly, I was arrested on Feb3 for drnking and driving, Im glad I didnt hurt anyone and Im sorry its people lke me who rob loved ones from people like you

Excellent poem!~ 5.0♥ thanks for voting and commetning on my poems

Again I feel that this poem is full of emotion and descriptive. One small point though the line:
'Here I lay in me bed'
Should that be my bed?
Good read though.

Keep Writing
Nici

Excellent.

I read this one too

man, that sounds like such a tragic event! i'm sorry it had to happen. but it is a wonderful poem!

Great story telling in this poem
and dam those drivers ohh geeze heh
much love take caree great write 5/5

I cant imagine what you go through each day. you have been through more than anyone should ever have to go through. i am so sorry. you are a great poet though keep it up.