This was a good poem, sad, but good. 5/5 Keep up the writing. I'm sorry and I know it's hard to lose someone but somehow we keep going on. Check out my poem if you WANT sometime.

that was amazing, sad but amazing! i loved it! your such and awesome writer
love always,
elissa

wow gd poem. im really sorry about ur cuz. 5/5

I like this poems

keep writing, this was a sad poem but put together nicely. xoxox megan 5/5

aww this is such a good and sad poem 5/5 good work im sorry bout ur cousin

i'm so sorry for your loss thats so sad to hear about that

"Oh my Gosh!" I gasped as soon as I finished. Powerful, and if this doesn't get out your story, NOTHING will! I will make sure you, your cousin, and anyone suffering is in my prayers. XOXO
Luv always, KT

thats so sad, im sorry and be strong. incredibly moving poem though
trevor--

hey, that really sad... and really good. keep it up
love xXlostXx

good poem, its so sad, and i will say a prayer tonite!
*~lindz*~

That was very good. It had a lot of meaning. Keep up the good work.

That's sad....

I love your poems!!! all of em!!!

Hey im so sry you had to go threw that but thats one of the best poems i have ever read!! keep it up!