that was good as fu(k....i loved it a hella lot!@~

Baby this poem is awesome...although some bits you talk about "i" but then change to "she"...so its hard to realise whether your trying to explain from your eyes or want to be that person.. but grea job your definately going on my favourites hunny.. all my love megzzy

awww, so very sad. But once again this is one of my favorite poems. You have a great way of expressing your feelings, and are an awsome writer!

>Katie<

wow, I'm speechless. It's awesome. Excellent job. Def 5 Thanks for the comment. I'm adding you to my fav's

~no more

Tina, I'm probably your biggest fan. Every poem of yours is exactly how I feel, but i'm only 13 and my friend also committed suicide. Danny, she died on sept. 23? My birthday is sept. 22, my friend died on march 15(i don't think you care i just wanted to write this) Keep up the good work

i cant put into words what i want to say to u so ill just say something shallow and of no meaning at all what so ever: good job...keep it up...i loved it.
deeply moved seriously.
~Lindsey

Hey such a great poem!, but so sad, i hope thing start to look up for you soon, luv mel