Nice poem.

take care

great...I think

great...I think

Very short but beautiful! 5/5 Take Care~! Brooke
I tried a couple nature poems if you would could you read walk on the beach. Would love to know what you think. Thanx!

nice poems !

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I have a lot of four letter words to decribe all those comments.

But now for a serious one.

THis poem is short and simple, and i enjoyed it, it captures the simple nature of nature very well.

Great work. (shame about those comments)

Jon

I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

That is a awsome poem!