This is great... It's so deep. Unfortunately, my parents wouldn't really care if I were to end my life... they're not the "parent" type. If you can please read some of my poems as well... I would really appreciate it. They're much like this poem. Great job once again 5/5
This is a really amazing poem! The one thing wrong is that the rhyming is too much. This is a sad and depressing poem and you should focus more on the poem than the rhyme. You probably don't want this from a 13 year old but I thought id tell ya. Well great job anyways!
that is really powerfun. it brought a tear to my eye. i have actually thought about that sxact concept many times which has kept me in this world. you did a very good job of translating it into a poem. Keep up the good work and thanks for commenting on mine.
I'm specchless, I have no words in my mouth. This was so....AMAZING!! I can't believe how well written this is, very beautiful and sad at the same time. This poem really made me cry and it made me think about the times I tried to take my life.....Great poem, it deserves so much more than 5
that is an excellent poem n a very sad one too! thank u 4 commenting on my poem 'the pain inside' it meant alot to me tho it is not the way i look at life but it used to be anyway great work 5/5