AWESUM AWESUM AWESUM...this was so great!!!! keep up the awesumly awesum work!!
lylas always and forever,
shortie
xoxoxoxo

speechlesss deadly poem a true masterpeice!!!!
x)

great poem stanzas 2-5 i knoe what u're talking about..i've felt that way before. Anyway your writing was amazing, keep up the great work. great flow and i was happy that I took the time to read it =-)

~Christina~

Hey hope u r ok. I really loved the way you wrote this poem! Great job and beautifully written :)

:( very sad... great flow
5/5

hey haily great poem and sorry bout everything i wish it were different
luv ya always '
courtney

heyy reeli sad poem it makes mine called lonely girl look like crap lol id dint copy urs u can tell my was amde earlier but anyways its reeli good 5/5

haily this is a really great poem. it flows beautifully. and u r not that lonley girl i am always here 4 you. you do have friends that care and love u. well keep up the great work. i love ya always and im always just a call or walk away. love ya
***aShLeIgH***

That's sad. Well writen. I can relate. Good job. 5/5

~no more

wow this poem is amazing. its so sad. and i love the ending. u write it to where no one can truely get the meaning of it unless they read all of it. this poem is very well done. keep up the good work sweetie!!!5/5

WOW... I really liked it!!! alot!!!
Great job!!

Great poem! It was very good and sooo sad! Dont be lonlely because you know that im here 4 u! Whenever you want to talk or need a soilder to cry on I'm here you babe! lol 5.0 Oh yea i can totally relate so we will have a lot to talk abt! ♥

Great job..Its really sad, I like the ending...Keep up the good work

AWESOME poem! great work & 5/5 definitely

hey, very impressive... a hint to help you, try to read the dictionary or something so your poem doesnt seem so akward. i am talking about "strife"

rehtaeh

Love this write. Great job hun. >3jess

I told you i would be honest. I think it's great!! I'm sick of reading poems that suck! Thanks for writing something good!! haha keep it up!

wow. this poem was great, it brought tears to my eyes. I like the depth and the thought.
Jordan-Paige

That was amazing with a alot of emotion 5/5
p.s. read mine sometime

That was amazing with a alot of emotion 5/5
p.s. read mine sometime