Comments : Ashes To Truth

  • 12 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    That write is extrodenary. I loved it. Very sad, but point well spoken. Great job. >3jess

  • 12 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    Omgosh, this poem is really really good! It shows so much about how life is. Great job! Keep up the gReAt work!

  • 12 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    That was an awsome poem! I loved it. That's how me and my mom are too. I have three brothers and a sister and sometimes I believe that if I died they would be the only ones to care. Keep up the great work! And just know all the poeple on this site would miss your lovely turthful words if you died! Your not alone!
    ~As Always
    left_2_die

  • 12 years ago

    by teaia

    wow, im going thruogh some hard times right now and this was really touching, and true, for it being random it was great, keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Nikki

    ohh thats a really nice poem...i mean it's the shocking truth and thats wats so good i mean it's showing us what all them naive people dont see, and it's good 2 not hide away from the truth

    your a great writer, keep it up xox and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by krystal

    that was sooooooo sad but sooooooooooooo true i loved it it made me cry 5/5 great work keep it up!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by DefoЯmed

    Omg... That poem is sooo good...
    is that how u feel? or just a random thing 2 right about it... it was.. omg.. its awesome

  • 12 years ago

    by Jordan

    Omg that was THE best poem I have ever read. It made me cry and really think about how many people death really eaffects, but mostly your family. That was absolutley incredible. 5/5.
    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • 12 years ago

    by Hailey

    Thanks Everyone..It Was Like A Realality Bit But A Bit made it Up..and well before Anyone Thinks Of Suicide..Rememer who Loves U..Even if Its One Person..its worth stikin round..thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristen

    You are such a great poet. I've hear and seen so much about you. Your like a legend. To read your poety is great. I hope your feeling better. Your sister writes well to. Great job, as usual. 5/5 = )

  • 12 years ago

    by Anke

    It was sooo goood!
    I think it's funny that you say at the end of the poem
    *enjoy*

  • 12 years ago

    by Arie

    that was awesome, you can write!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Red Charm

    She Wouldn't Have Wanted Her Nice Poetry Read
    The Happy Ones Picked From A Dark Pile
    She Would've Wanted Her Darkest Yet Truthful Pieces
    Bunnies And Love hearts Wasn't My baby's Style
    I loved this part. Such a sad poem but a great one too.~Red

  • 12 years ago

    by Kimeko Lancaster

    WOW THIS IS A VERY EXCELLENT POEM ITS SO SAD BUT ALSO SO VERY TRUE. YOU DID A GREAT JOB!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Nikki

    it was really good but sad 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsea Hopkins

    Wow<---that's all I have to say

  • 12 years ago

    by Sweetie702

    all i can say is i've been reading sad and depressing poetry and i have been crying my eyes out (yours is no exception). your an unbelievable writer, you piece is so true and so touching. it made me think twice about doing something. thanks so much and great work!
    hugs and lots of love,
    katie

  • 12 years ago

    by bri

    wow that was awsum i cant wait to read your next poem