Wow. That was excellent!!!

Yea this poem is really good... I understand what you mean, keep up the good work :-p

Fantastic job on this! I love that ending! 5/5

That is so good!! I really think it relates to me!!

PLZ Coment on mine 2!! THNX

Jessica

I really like your poem. It's fantastic! 5/5 You're really talented!
<3 Beka

W0W good poem Lol
SHAWN

i could have sworn i commented on this like wen it came out guess not o well freakin totally awesome poem loved it
Dee

Wow this was great. I read the last paragraph first and made my way up. You get alot of tears out of doing it that way. Still an excellent write. :) keep it up.

xx