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by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~
I love fire
fire is cool
Robert is a fool
Ed has a pool
Sarah has a rare form of desease called cardool
I am cool
by Heather M Craig
The repetition and wording was great, but I just didn't like your last line and maybe it's just me ... Keep writing though, i see potential. 4/5
With all respect,
Umm... I don't know Megan. I didn't really like it.
WTF is cardool?
Oh yeah. Megan, I changed the pic for our profile since our name isn't "Mortimer" anymore. I hope that's ok.-Sarah