Holy crap....im not going to put my heart on my sleeve like these others...you are an amazing writer..

10/10

Wow, i love this poem...all except for the whole "going down there" part, but this is amazing

Omg..this is amazing i love this poem great job 5/5 ♥

Wow. that's amazing. great ending!

Wow - you must really be angry with this person..... Much energy wasted on that emotion. But, i like the rhyme of the lines.

I love your poem!!!!!!!!!!!! its great!!!!!

This is great poem, the end is wonderful and not expected

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!! its got a ryhmy chant and it all makes sence. i love then end. you are a very amazing writer. keep writing!!

~Sammy

Purely amazing....
I was gripped from beginning to end...

wow.. u left me speechless.. =]

5/5

I really don't like rymes, but that twist at the end was fascinating.. i feel that way always

That deep

This Is An Amazing Poem You Have A Lot Of Talent And Keep Making Great Poems Cause Your Awsome!

Is this based on a true story? if so u shouldnt feel this way....life always has better side

I love it has soo much meaning.....wow keep it upp!! amazingg!!

I really like this poem...
I can feel what you are feeling...
nice work hope to read more of this kinda work in the future...
Amber

I loved it.

HeartStone

Wow.. that is really touching..:D
keep it up..!!

One of the Best 5/5

U are a good writer! i love ur ideas! how u get all this ideas men? share with us! hees!:)

Wow this is such a good poem. you put so much emotion into this. good job i can relate. 5/5.