From the begining to the end your words captivated me.It is trully an awesome write.The rhming scheme is perfect, nothing forced and the end really got me.I enjoy reading this beautiful piece.Good job.

Nice poem. But I am rather annoyed how when people write poems about depression, someone always ends up saying. "stay strong" or "don't do it" -_- EXTREMELY annoyed...

Sounds quite familiar , good one.

Wow! This poem speaks volumes! It's very easy to relate and the ending is so powerful! Amazing!

Wow what a good piece. As your doing through the piece you think oh who could it be an ex, a family member or a friend and then that ending sums it up in one fell swoop, a shocking, dark ending to an elegant piece.

The flow and rhythm are kept going throughout which is great too as it makes it more enjoyable to read.

Em

Well written

I wasn't expecting the ending... Very powerful peace.

5, Jenn

Wow! This is really raw and so sad and so well done. I am blown away.

So well penned! The ending was superb! Great write.