Wow.....that is truly amazing, that has to be the best poem I have ever read. There was one slight prob that didnt make sense
That she surely she would die
maybe put a comma after she? newayz, it was really really amazing keep it up!!
Oh my gosh that is AMAZING.. girl you have so much talent. I think that was the saddest piece of poetry i have ever written, its made me completely speechless..Well done honey listen to your heart and follow your dreams.. all my love forever megzzyxxx
Long but worth the read! It was very hard for me to read. I lost me twin sister to cancer. I wrote a poem At Peace about her. My family really doesn't talk about it so I felt I needed write my feelings. Very well written *Tears* Take Care! Brooke~
wow this was a really sad but great poem it made me cry then agin it made me smile i am sorry for loss it must had been hard but just remember that kathleen is up there watching over all she loves.