wow that was brilliant . . . i love your poetry . . . yaya i new one coool . . . it was so deep it was awesome . . .*sits in awe* . . . your are amazing at writing . . .truely amazing . . . love you bunches . . . il speak to you as soon as i get back . . . cant wait to read more . . .5/5 . . . luv jen x x x

Another great write. I'm pretty parc at thinkin bout titles but how bout 'Land of the lost and found'? It's pretty rubbish but I tried. 5/5. Keep smilin.

Em xx

wow amazed really so vid and beautiful and a dif style of writing too...sorry cant think o titles think thats hardest part of poem lol
xxxLoUxxx