that is a very good poem and i can relate to it please check out some of my stufff.~Chelsey

Awwww very sweet n a very nice n understanding flow awsoe keep up the good work dont quit ir give up on poetry b/c it never gives up on u n dont be a stranger hun 5/5 always
kate

GREAT POEM..
I LUVED IT..
BUT WEN I FINISHED I WAS LIKE F/UCK LOL CUZ I WANTED 2 READ MORE BUT DIS IS GOOD

I liked your passion in this poem. Even though it was short, i was drawn into it.
Aaron