awe sad, but good.

Awww that is so sad.But it is a good poem, and it makes you think.Again great poem.

goodin, haha, i like it u r becoming better than me i think, man , well keep it up, congradulate ur boy for me, i need to stop that aswell, stress reliever,
love,
brandon

aw.. thats soo sad.. but so good.. keep writing.. thnx for the comment on my poem..

Reminds people that from nowhere life on earth can also be taken away within seconds, shows the philospher in you I think. It good to see that, especially poets need it. Keep up the good work. Your words are like grab people or relaxes them, depending on the poem they read by you. I read this one 5 times alraedy. T/C Paul