hey it waz realy good i realy liked it

this is really sad...i am so sry if this is true...
~^eva^~

sis, that is the first time you've written about him being gone... and he's been gone a year...great poem...and i cried too....wonder why?

omg that was BRILLIANT! i no how it feels to lose a dad and mine has only been gone a month, the last paragraph actually made me cry, keep up the good work x

That was brilliantly written. I am sorry that u had to go through it. Can teel its all from t he heart.
Thanx 4 ur comment

I know how this feels, I went thru the same thing. Seems like god only takes who you need most. It may never get easier, but the time spent you can always remember and smile. love this poem.

I know I've already commented on this poem. Just wanted you to know that it inspired me to wrie a poem about my dad passing. It's somthing I usually try to avoid because it hurts so much. I felt your strenth and harbored my own. Thanks for the inspiration.

Oh my god! This is so sad. Me and my dad arn't exactally close. The only time I even talk to him is when he calls to talk to my brother. Sometimes I think of something like this happen and I cry. Please be strong.

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

really good poem very sad sorry bout wat happened

my mom just lost her dad (my grandpa) im gonna cry..love it.

omg that was sooo sad im so sorry that happend to you that was a really good poem your really good at writing keep writing

omfg thi sis so so sad .. great work adn keep strong !!! 5/5

that was really good.... i mean i understand how you feel!!!!that was great5/5

omg i cried, im cryng rite noww, omg, c i cant tell my daddy i luv him, cuz my daddy left, he jus walked out of life n he hardly calls.,...i dont even think he cares...anyways, keep writing, your poems are good, i like them, and im really sorry about ur dad.

omg i cried, im cryng rite noww, omg, c i cant tell my daddy i luv him, cuz my daddy left, he jus walked out of life n he hardly calls.,...i dont even think he cares...anyways, keep writing, your poems are good, i like them, and im really sorry about ur dad.

Oh My Goodness! Thats Truly A Deep Poem! That Expresses Alot Of Feelings, Im Really Sorry If This Was A True Event, I Just Want You To Know You Were Lucky To Have A Dad In Your Life. :((

Im Really Sorry If This Was A True Event In Your Life I Just Want You To Know Your Lucky Even If You Had A Chance To See Your Dad! I Cant See Mine. :(

i m really sorry for your dad mine just die a year ago i feel ur pain

i'm so sorry....

OH great poem. So sad to hear he didn't live to hear your message.

Shirlz