I really like your poem, I lost my Dad too, so I understand what you are going through/went through

keep up the gd writing, i kinda no what ur going through i also lost my dad. the questions cannot b answerd. thats the worse part. kirstyxxx

as you know, i know exactly what you are going through, he was my dad too....great writing...we'll pull through this

absolutely brilliant ending to a brilliant first part!

as good as the first one and i dont know ur dad but i bet he is watching over u and he appreciates the poems u wrote bout him. 5/5