Great poem!!!!!

lemme take a guess the cloud is you? well i dnt knoe if u remember but our first hw in art was to write abt something tht represented us and i put a cloud x) we dont just have names in common lol

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Im assuming the cloud was you, good poem, I liked it.. clever little picture.. well done

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please take a look at mine thanks

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This was very good, it's different that other poems I have read, but it does have a message in it. I loved it! Xx Keep up the great work! I'm adding you to my favorites.

i think the cloud stands fer a person, prolly u, am i rite?!? lol well great job once again, ur a great poet! 5/5

I love the methaphor of the cloud. It truly makes this a clouded wonder, by keeping the reader guess while enjoying a good read. good job

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Awesome poem, I really likes it. Thanks for the comment, take care