Absolutely beautiful~ So many people are mislead by pictures in magazines. They go to great lengths to try and be someone their not. This poem sends a very good message. Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~

lol finnally...during school ur were callin urself fat..i am fat n ur like a million pounds lighter than i am...lol but the poem is soo true...keep up the good work
-courtney

once again im blown away. you have beautiful writting ability and style. keep the AMAZING work up. 5/5
love
paulette

"I take off my makeup
To reveal the true me
Now this is the girl
I want to be"
I wish more people could say this. i'm tired of all the media driven insanity to be "beautiful". I don't think 5'11", 118lbs, covered in make up and skanky clothes constitutes beauty... people should be proud of who they are and not worry about who they aren't.
Very well written poem with a great message. More people need to read this poem and find the truth, cause you're telling it here.

wow you don't know how much I can relate to this. I'm so glad you've written it. This is the kind of thing that gives hope to people, thank you so much.
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im stunned... this is so amazing... this can every girl relate to.. wow, i have no words... good written... im adding you to my favorites list... excellent

Thank you everyone! <33

wow! amazing poem. i love it soooooo much. awesome job

THIS WAS FRICKIN AWESUM lol..this was one of ur best poems..hun u finally c what all of us have been trying to tell u!! 5/5 great job!!
luv ya always and forever,
ur sis

Awesome poem! i wish there were more poems like this! It had sucha great message that i wish gurls would understand! you made it seem effortless for you to write but anyways def. a 5/5! awesome

vry good msg....nd greatly worded...5/5

That was great, I liked the message that you got across. It was expressed very well, 5/5.

Amazing. 5/5 . You should never hide who the real you is. <3

this poem is so good*cries*it actually made me feel better thanks

Stunning!

I love it!!!!! That is exactly wut I try to tell people, but no one listens. Ur poem is great inspiration!!!!! Keep up the great work!
*~.:.~*Lisa Pizza*~.:.~*

your poem was excellent!!!!!!! im not the prettiest girl but i want to be. if i go and starvve my self do u think that i will be skinny

WHOA! Beautifully done! A message that so many young girls need to hear and more importantly understand. What made me understand is meeting a guy who I did not find attractive AT ALL but after getting to know him I found out he was awesome! One of the most beautiful people I know.
The only thing I'd suggest is to add something to this stanza ('truly' maybe)
"Now this is the girl
I truly want to be"
Just to make it a little more powerful.
No big deal...it'll still be perfect either way. Excellent write! :)

Good job i get the message.. i can see that it isn't forced and it's all from the hart...

only lil thing is that sumtimes when you have short and then long sentances it makes the rythem shaky... try making them equal lenght or peeps replaying the same pattern

Another great poem keep up the good work.