Ummm...It was short, but it was cool i guess, it just made me think of all da bomings thatz been hapnin in london....But well done anyways. Plz comment n rate some of my latest stuff when u get da chance, thankz x

that was diffrent but i liked it it was a lil short but thats ok and i liike trains so i liked the poem!!! good job keep it up!

This poem flowed good too! awsome job!

I like the way you have so many different subjects to write about, it is great talent.