Happy Bday

by patrick125   Aug 2, 2005


Happy Birthday
To a realy good friend

you are now 17
one step closer

you have 17 years down
and one more to go

soon you will be 18
an out on your own

but there will be new problems for you to face
you'll be in the working world
and you'll have bills to pay
and it wont be easy

take the time to sit back and enjoy what you have

you are a good friend
a good friend is one in a trillion
a needle in a mountain sized hay stack

Happy Birthday Ashleigh

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*angel_tears~*

    Hey good poem!!its good u have a great friend u care 4

  • 18 years ago

    by Mat

    It really was lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    That wasnt that bad!

  • 18 years ago

    by patrick125

    Thanks, mat, i like to know what people realy think.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mat

    dude i'm sorry, i know i'm ur best friend and i'm supposed to support you, but i didn't feel much from you on that one. It wasn't good, but I didn't think it was bad. I think u just need to put more effort into this kind of thing.

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