This is y I hate war...but its the only way in this world that things like problems r solved...in violence...kinda sad...wouldn't u say?

I like the ending...interesting piece... I hate war too. I don't think it solves anything. Yes, very sad.

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awwness, so sad....
its so sad

... wow... Chills... I LOVED the story. Original. So good. :) 5/5 for surrrrrrrrrrrre!!!

WAr, it ruins most, so some can be better, but still ruins most.

Wow, you did a brilliant job on this one.
yeah, I hate war too. It ruins everything.
you're so talented. keep writing your
wonderful poems.
wish you the best,
marjan

Wow, you write wonderfully michael.
thanks for your comment on my poem.
I really appreciate that.
take care,
marjan

It's so touching..:'( I'M CRYING, THE WAR MUST BE STOP!!!!!!!!!! What's wrong with those guys?!!!!

By the way, thanks for all your comments and most of my comments are saying about the guy i love...i never had a boyfriend...and you know none of my friend except one of my best friend knows how to appreciate poems...they just read it and say...hey, it's good, that's all.

That was very descrriptive. if more people thought of war this way maybe they would get some sense into them and stop the stupidity. keep writting