Comments : Will you be my Valentine?(part two)

  • 12 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Hm, i liked this one too. It had a sort of uniqueness. It was very well written, and i loved how you said what will be happening and then you ask over again with such passion for that girl to be your Valentine. I hope she says yes, if she is real.

    -Jennifer.

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    Beautiful!!! keep up the great work!
    -xXx-

  • 12 years ago

    by David Paul

    Hey it was pretty good. Better than the last one. Good job. Never give up. kilman

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wooow gd poem dude

    keep it up

    sarah x x x

  • 12 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Pretty...it's so beautiful...i don't think any girl would reject you for a poem so sweet like this...the girl who does...must be blind...