Wow this is a great way to luck at it (not in happy but creative)
this is a very creative poem and the flow was well put together :)

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cool!

very well written! and it was different, i enjoyed it! i mean it was good, the emotion, the rhyme, definately worth the read! 5/5

Holy crap...that was amazing

Whatever the last two lines were before, I must admit, I'd like this one better no matter what. It goes very well the the poem.

My favourite lines were:

"but i must admit it now
i need to move on
I'll let the sun rise
i know i'm more than just a pawn "

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Very good once again you've got talent5/5