This was a excellent poem!!
Its a story and i was not expecting the ennd but was so nice how they symbolized their love with a rose throughout the time together..its very sad at the end!

the flow was great and it kept me reading :)

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Hmmm...how weird...sounds kinda familiar. I wonder why? Maybe cuz its like mine! G2G call you now.

An amazing job! I am glad it's not true! I love the way you used the roses to painted the picture of true love! Take Care! Brooke~

that was an amazing poem that really touched me. he had a lot of emotion in it. the rythm was great and so were the words. all i can say is WOW! keep on writing. you have a gift. x

Well, this would be a beautiful story. This would be a very romantic experience I would think. As they say, til death due us part. Thanks for the read :) 5/5

awww this poem is reli sweet i loved it 5/5 xxx

AWW... that was so sad.. i reli loved.. u used the rhyme perfectly in place.. i loved how the colors symbolized different beautiful things and emotions and the way it fit every description and feeling.. i congratulate u on the talent and on the ability to use ur words in describing something u didnt experience...
keep it up
love
nannoush

AWW.. that was reli sad.. and beautiful.. i loved the rhyme.. it was perfectly placed.. i love the way the colors of the roses each symbolized a different feeling and emotion instead of words.. i congratulate u on ur talent and ur ability to use such words to write about smthn u didnt experience..
keep it up.. i gave u my 5
nannoush

that was awsome! so sad...

Great poem! Your style is very unique! Keep up the great work!

Very very well written! I enjoyed i! that was very very good, it flowed nicely and you made your point! great job!! 5/5!!

Damn thats good great jod

Love it, content vastly outweighs any scheme issues. Conceptually brilliant, wish I had thought of it. *smiles*

I usually think the idea of writing a poem about a rose is a bit too cliché, but this is excellent. I might write a poem about a rose myself. =)

My favourite lines were:

"
now it's my turn to give
a single rose of black
as i lay it on your coffin
i wish i could bring you back"

And you did wonderfully for your first try, M'Dear.

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