i really really like this one. even though it was a story and not a poem it still has a poetic feel to it. it has a lot of feeling in it. keep it up.

Wow...thats really sad...is it true? very well written though I really enjoyed reading this! and thank you so much for your comment it meant alot..
Christina

Definitely has a poetic feel to it...it's so beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. Incredible...

xxx

Mr monkey that was an amazing story! it brought tears to my eyes. 5/5 great job!
chelsea

Hey that was realy good keep it up!

Awsome poem bud... sad... but just awsome..

take care

Omg, that was really good, beautifully written, wow, i'm speechless...

Ok... seeing as i wrote this, i PROBABLY didnt jump in front of a car, k? yeah, common sense will tell anyone that has it that this story isnt true. or... the events in it arent, at least

LMFAO!!!!!!! ZAC!!!! LMFAOOO!!! NICE........Way to treat your commentors...wow...lmfao!!!! omg...hysterical....omg....that just made my day....like you wouldn't BELIEVE....lmao!

Classic...

and as much as I hate to insult these awsome people, but even I'm smarter than that...and I set a whole new meaning to idiots everywhere.lol....remember when I thought what you said, some kind of sickness was a band? lol...wow....I felt so stupid..

Well I hope you're okay...misisn you lots.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Timo just keeps getting hotter....and hotter...and hotter...

Meggy gave me that kiss.

~Sierra

__Meatball Hoagie#2__

Oh boy. I remember for some odd reason when you published this. I remember that day clearer than any other day though i'm not even sure why. I loved this story, so much emotion that it was just CRUSHING to read it. but I loved it as I do now too