Ash, this was a great poem. I'm sorry to any one that lost someone.

Me too.

ok fine, I'll write more.
Very intense, brings a sort of agonizing reminiscince out of you, y'know? The day the twin towers were hit changed history for us all, and I think it's important that people like us recognize that.

Amazing One!!!!!! 5.5 Ash! Please check out mine! Amazing poem! 5.5!!!!
Keep 'em coming! Glad that your back writing poems! 5.5! Love, Hugs---

Gold Princess~~

Yes.. 9/11 was very tragic and i too feel the same as you
great poem

This poem was heartfelt. grt job. sry to anyone who lost someone on 9/11.

please comment on any of my poems when you have time.

love,
nana

Heart felt and wonderful. hopefully talk to ya later

9/11 was truly a tragic day in Americans lives. It is great that you wrote this and to help us remember. Great work!
~*hAiLy*~

Amazing job, i loved it, 5/5

Excellent poem i luv it good job i do luv it keep up the good work :)

I liked it i gave it a 4/5 some grammer mistakes, and everynow and then it got a little tireing but all around it was pritty god.

Hey yes a very tragic day indeed. I understood the poem well but maybe you could use the spell checker because that will help if you can't spell a few of the words. Overall i'm giving it a 5 because it is such a good piece of work. Keep it up. :)

Tragic event. Good poem