Haha! Not your best work? Not your best work?! NOT YOUR BEST WORK?!?! Edit your poem and take that out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing poem Ash! 5!

Marielys

Not your best work!? and yet its still brilliant! xox

Wow wow =D great..5/5!

Wonderful job and trust me its really good. 5/5

I hope this is third person writing and not personal thoughts. As much as it worries me, it's a good poem, and I hope you keep on writing.

I liked it.. 4/5.. i can relate to this so closely.. honestly, it's like something i would write in a different style,.. i cant explain it.. when i write like that i usually dont accredit it as being my best work, but i cherish how it helped me express my feelings.. i dont like the last line,.. it needs punctuation and the fact that it doesnt rhyme just doesnt sit well with me.. i think itd be a stronger ending if u expressed that idea in different words that rhymed, but just my thoughts.. god read

That wuz great.......u have better bu it wuz still great.......i luved it.........an hope to have tons more of ur stuff to read.........keep up the good work.........

Hey, i really like this, it's clever i can completely relate.
XxX Charli XxX

GREAT POEM! =D i liked it alot!

Not one of your best but still a great poem

Jacs
xxx

I like it it is good

I loved ur poem. i was suicidal and depressed and wondered the same thing. u said this wasnt ur best but i liked it alot.

I loved ur poem. i was suicidal and depressed and wondered the same thing. u said this wasnt ur best but i liked it alot.

Sad, sad poem good job

This is a ****** awesome poem. this is really good. i can realate to some of it. good work.

Ok this isnt your best work. theres room for improvment

I didnt find any mistake in this one; awesome job, TeArS. 5/5