Amanda,

Extremly well written and I throughlly enjoyed reading it. Lovely piece of work.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Thanks Nada for the comment. The repeats are part of the poem. The scheme of the poem is: ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the lines that have to be repeated:)

A very good poem. The structure is very rigid, and yet you manage to control your ideas in an eloquent manner. Very well done, and an excellent poem indeed!

This poem is very good. i like the rhyme scheme and the flow all throughout this poem.