Comments : Complex(Gay Poem)

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael

    For those who dont know whats going on...i think (nothing meaning that its bad, just a shoker) I'm (perhaps)turning gay. So...I wrote this poem...I have not had my first kiss, nor by the same sex...its bad...I can tell...:p

  • 18 years ago

    by KitchBlood

    Its good! Its not that complex dude! You like it so go with it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    Wow! that was great man! i loved it, pure emotion and talent!! always keep writting! great poem
    ~KIT~

  • 18 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    Hey, that was an amazing poem... I'm glad I checked it out. I can imagine that you would find that situation quite confusing and 'complex' but hey, if you like it, then go with it, you shouldn't care what other people say or think about you, live life for yourself and not for everyone else... but it was a great poem, so emotional... I loved it =D...

    Stay Strong ^_^

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

    P.S. If you have a minute, could you maybe check out some of my work... it would mean alot to me... =)

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow it grabbed me from the beginning to the end.....So emotional and deep, I love it, well done..you have talent!!!

    *Much Love sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony

    Why would you be ashamed of who you love dude? who cares what people say? you are who you are and you will be till the day you die. Why not run with it? Great poem. ^_^

    ~Anthony

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's not complex, i am not like you but i can understand how you feel, i hate those people who thinks you guys are like...you know, they just don't understand, you don't have to feel ashame for who you are, instead those who cant accept you for who you are that should be ashame.

    I'm proud of you,
    Keep it up,
    You are one great guy.

    LOVE...PEACE...^_^

  • Aww this poem is beautiful, it shouldn't matter what people think. I love the way you tell everyone exaxtly what your body is saying and feeling, 5/5
    xox

  • 18 years ago

    by StormyWeather

    I like the way you express how you feel in this poem. So what if you're gay? Kisses are always complex, and you captured the extra insecurities of it being a same sex kiss really well. Keep your head up, and be proud of who you are.

    abbi x

    Oh, and by the way, it's accept not except

    'Our hands clasped,
    we are both together,
    sharing our love,
    but I can’t seem to EXCEPT that.'